The Rising Sun
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2/4/2018 09:29:23 pm
This is a good description, but there are some grammar errors and some parts don't make sense. Sounds like a really interesting book though.
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2/5/2018 12:29:13 pm
I thought that your description had some gaps that need filling for the summary to make sense. I also think some more background information could have been useful. Other than thought the rest was very nice and clean. Well done.
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